谁能帮我看一下我写的这篇雅思作文能有几分?
Theuniversityshouldnotprovidesomuchtheoreticalknowledgebutgivestudentsmorepracticaltraining.Doyouagreeordisagree?
Inmodernsociety,moreandmorepeoplethinkthattheuniversityshouldnotprovidesomuchtheoreticalknowledgebutgivestudentsmorepracticaltraining.Howeverthere’salsoalotofpeopledonotagreewiththem.Inmyopinion,theuniversityprovidestudentmorepracticaltrainingisverynecessary.
First,whenpeoplecometouniversity,mostofthemismorethan18yearsold,sotheyhaveabilitytoteach-self.Thatmeansstudentcanlearntheoreticalknowledgemainlybyself-teachingratherthanbylessons.
Second,inmodernsociety,thepracticalabilityisbecomingmoreandmoreimportant.Butinschool,studentsrarelyhavechancetopracticethemselves.Themostoftheirlifeiscomparewithlotsofbooksratherthanpracticaltraining.Thereforewhengraduatingfromuniversity,manystudentsfindthemcannotadaptsocialworkingrequirement.Thatmakesthemfrustrated.Ifthissituationhappens,it’llbethefailureofhigheducationoftheuniversity.
Third,thetargetofhigheducationistobringuppersonwithabilityforsociety.Theabilitycanbeunderstoodintwopoints:oneistheoreticalability,theotherispracticalability.Asaresult,thepracticaltrainingisalsoaveryimportpartinhigheducation.Manyuniversitiesgraduallyknowthatpracticaltrainingisnecessarybutmostofuniversitiesdonotmakeenougheffortorevengiveenoughattentiontothismaintask.Thustheycouldnotreallycompletetheirduty.
SoIagreethatshouldnotprovidesomuchtheoreticalknowledgebutgivestudentsmorepracticaltraining.
这篇作文是我自己写的,上次拿到雅思救星上请老师批改,老师给了我5.0分,大家觉得雅思救星的老师给我5.0分合适吗?
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